lapsus linguae

Wednesday, May 30, 2007

Lazy

No will
to swim these
careless white
sheets between
spent
you and me.

5 Comments:

Blogger Eroteme said...

I wonder how your energy got spent, given that you are lazy!! ;-) I enjoyed reading this one too...

Saturday, June 02, 2007 6:46:00 AM  
Blogger Anoop said...

White sheets? That is strange ...:)

Saturday, June 02, 2007 8:36:00 AM  
Blogger gP said...

precise. nice.

Thursday, June 14, 2007 11:09:00 PM  
Blogger Rakesh said...

spent 'him' and white sheets don't probably go together?

Thursday, June 12, 2008 12:14:00 AM  
Blogger Dileepan said...

I opened my blog after ages and was checking linked blogs, removing all the cobwebs!

I initially misread this poem as:

No will
to swim these
careless white
sheets spent
between
you and me.

It sounded equally beautiful.

Wednesday, November 11, 2009 3:08:00 PM  

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