lapsus linguae

Tuesday, November 07, 2006

Please.

Can I have
your face and voice,
a place of our own,
footsteps,
afternoon sun drawing lines between us,
music and wine,
colour of some sort,
the skin behind your ear,
a shape to hold.

If its too much to ask -
a yellowing letter
to trace the dot of your i,
an old shirt or
even a forgotten promise,
a folded picture
of a younger you and me
smiling or no,
would do as well -

Anything more than
this pang and missed beat
to hold onto.

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6 Comments:

Blogger Krish said...

"even a forgotten promise"- How I wish, the "even" wasnt there!

Tuesday, November 07, 2006 3:05:00 PM  
Blogger Anu said...

Very beautiful! Couldn't resist commenting! :)

Tuesday, November 07, 2006 4:10:00 PM  
Blogger Rathish said...

Brilliant - and I am not using the word lightly! Brilliant!

Thursday, December 07, 2006 10:53:00 PM  
Blogger Gujjubhai in Liberia said...

sigh........

Sunday, January 28, 2007 11:57:00 AM  
Blogger Vidhya said...

awesome!! i love it!!

Friday, February 06, 2009 1:27:00 AM  
Blogger chandana easwaramurthy said...

Some how makes me feel a commitment for life is too much to take,be it love,be it marriage!!!!
May be,even leaves me thinking,I have too much to handle already!!! Is it a common feeling,or just a passing cloud which comes/goes with age and maturity?

Wednesday, September 02, 2009 4:24:00 PM  

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